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Excerpt from Elffolk and the Crystal Caves of Atlantis
Chapter One - An Imaginary Line
 

It was the very last place you'd expect to find a village. There were no roads leading to it and no dot marking its place on a map. But that was precisely the way the elves wanted it. Tucked away in a valley, under the shadows of ancient pines, the village had remained a secret on the island of Atlantis for over 200 years. 

Around the village, an imaginary line had been drawn. The line was an unofficial border of sorts meant to keep the elves from wandering too far. Besides, there was no particular reason to leave Elffolk. Everything an honest elf should ever need or want could be found within the village. More than that, the line had always been there, and everyone respected it.

Still, there was no accounting for the rebellious streaks of young elves. 

Part-way up the mountain, Enna, a young elf, stood at the line. Being an imaginary line, there was nothing to see. So, after a lot of careful thought, she picked a spot in the forest and declared it the border.

"You had better not cross it," Nissa warned. Nissa was Enna’s older sister. She stood with her arms folded across her chest, staring at Enna.

"What if I do?" Enna shrugged. "What’s the worst that could happen?"

Nissa stared at her blankly. That was just it. They didn’t know. Since their earliest days, they’d heard tales of the dreaded big people who lived somewhere beyond the imaginary line. 

A full-grown elf reached a proud height of three feet. The big people, it was rumoured, were twice that height, and their weight was several times that of an elf. But far more frightening than their hulking size, the big people of Atlantis were said to be cold-hearted and cruel. 

The truth of the matter was no elf alive in Elffolk had ever actually seen a big person. And at times, Enna half suspected that the older elves had made the whole thing up. 

Enna took one giant step forward - an obvious breach of the border.

"Don’t!" Nissa sucked in her breath sharply.

Enna turned and grinned. "It’s an imaginary line, Nissa. It doesn’t mean anything. It’s just a step." 

"Get back!" Nissa’s hands were on her hips now, her mouth an angry thin line.

Enna glanced around, her feet planted firmly on the ground. "Seems fine, Nissa. Actually, it feels nicer over here. You should join me."

Nissa rolled her eyes and started in on a familiar lecture about rules and responsibility. As the older sister, Nissa seemed to consider it her job to keep Enna in line.

Enna turned away as her sister droned on. There was no use covering her ears. The elves didn't speak aloud to one another. They used mental telepathy to communicate -  meaning they had only to think a thought and direct it at another elf. The other elf read the thought and responded with his or her own thought. They were able to communicate with animals this way as well. 

Mica trotted past them both. A tall brown cat, Mica pressed on further up the mountain, well past the imaginary line. He flopped on to his side and glanced over at the elves casually. They, in turn, were gaping at him. 

"What?" he asked.

"You just crossed the line!" Nissa thought. Her mouth was open and her hands were turned up in a gesture of disbelief.

"So what? I come here all the time."

"See Nissa!" Enna thought triumphantly. "It must be fine if Mica can do it…."

"I like to get away from the hustle and bustle of the village," Mica explained with a long drawn-out cat yawn. 

Enna and Nissa exchanged amused glances. There was no hustle - and definitely no bustle - in Elffolk. Things moved along at a snail’s pace. The elves walked slowly, strolling and sauntering from one place to the next. They took their time to eat as well, and often breakfast turned into lunch before anyone had left the table.

Mica ignored the elves' smirks. Instead, he turned his attention to his right paw, licked it a few times, and then pressed it against his ear. 

Suddenly, he glanced up, his eyes wide, ears back, the fur on his head standing on end. "What was that?" He scrambled to his feet and crouched low to the ground.

Enna and Nissa froze in place instantly.

"I just heard something," Mica added.

Enna looked around through the surrounding woods. The tall evergreens cast shadows across the forest floor - shadows that now seemed very ominous. Anywhere, something - or someone - could be lurking. 

"Where did the noise come from?" Nissa asked.

Mica appeared deep in thought. "You know what, on second thought, never mind. It was something else." 

"What do you mean - something else?"

"It was nothing." Mica glanced away. But the elves were waiting for an explanation. "It was just my stomach growling," he added sheepishly, turning his attention to a beetle on a nearby tree. "That reminds me, I haven’t had a bite to eat since breakfast."

"Mica, it was breakfast half an hour ago," Nissa retorted with a loud sigh. "Don’t scare us like that." 

They turned back toward the valley, winding their way through the trees. A cloud passed over the sun, and a great shadow settled over the forest like a heavy blanket.

"Wait," Mica thought. "There it is again." He stopped dead in his tracks this time. He sniffed the air and glanced up through the trees suspiciously.

"Stop it, Mica!" Nissa stomped her foot. "It’s not funny."

Just then, a handful of brown birds fluttered from the tree branches. A squirrel raced down the trunk of a nearby tree and scurried past them. And a soft rustling underfoot marked the flight of mice, snakes and other small creatures tearing through the undergrowth. 

Enna glanced to the sky just as a flock of yellow canaries flew past. A moment later, a second flock sailed by. They were all headed in the same direction - due south. 

"Something is happening," Nissa thought worriedly. 

"What is it?" 

"Run!" Mica's thoughts screamed out. "To the meadow!"

They sprinted through the trees at top speed, the slope of the mountain carrying them ever faster. Soon they were flying down the mountain so fast, it seemed their legs were moving on automatic, and the rest of their bodies were just trying to keep up.

Enna caught her shoulder on a rough tree trunk. She felt the sting of the scrape but pressed on. A few seconds later, she stubbed her toe on a rock. Then she heard a yelp from behind. Glancing over her shoulder, she spotted her sister. 

Nissa was lying face-down on the ground. 

Enna tried skidding to a halt, but she couldn't slow down. Thinking fast, she wrapped her arms around a tree trunk and hung on for dear life. Her legs swung out from under her. She spun halfway around the tree. Next, she was soaring through the air. Finally, smashing into some prickly bushes, she came to a full and final stop. 

Groping tree roots and branches, she clambered back up the steep slope. Nissa had rolled on to her side.

"You OK?" Enna asked, helping Nissa to her feet.

"I tripped on a tree root," she grumbled.

Mud was smeared across Nissa's cheeks. Old leaves and twigs were tangled in her blond hair. Enna could hardly believe her sister had just taken a harmless tumble. By looking at her, it would seem she had skidded halfway down the mountain on her head. 

They tore off again, back down the mountain, back toward the meadow. 

"Come on already!" Mica thought from somewhere ahead. 

They could see the grassy meadow through the trees now. Another few seconds and they had slipped out of the forest. 

Hunched over, hands on knees, they stopped to catch their breath.

"Keep running!" Mica directed. He was bounding toward the centre of the meadow. The top of his head was just barely visible above the tall grass.

They raced to the flat black boulder in the middle of the meadow, wondering whether they were being chased. When they arrived at the boulder, Mica was already standing on top. He was looking north toward the tree line, waiting, waiting for something.

"What is it?" Enna asked. She glanced around and realized they weren’t alone in the meadow. A small herd of deer was resting nearby. To the west, a fox lay low in the grass and, throughout the meadow, rabbits crowded together in clusters. 

Suddenly, a wild screeching sound filled the air. A black cloud erupted from the cliffs at the top of the mountain. The cloud shrank and grew and shifted shape as it approached. Enna watched with a mixture of curiosity and fear. It was like nothing she’d ever seen before. The cloud moved quickly in their direction. As it passed by overhead, she realized it was just a large group of bats. 

Just then, the ground shifted under Enna's feet. She reached out, hoping to grasp something solid, but everything around her was shaking, too. The sound of crashing trees echoed through the valley. Then came the sound of tumbling rocks, smashing through the forest. The elves and animals watched, silent and still. 

A few seconds passed and the shaking stopped. Enna and Nissa stood in place, wondering whether they'd felt the last of it. 

"An earthquake," Nissa thought at last. 

"Not like the usual little earth tremors." 

"We should get back and make sure everything is all right at home."

Enna nodded, gazing into the forest. "I hope no one was hurt by all those falling rocks."

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